Unfinished Limerick Comments

Not a true rhyme, Smoky, but I really like the idea behind it. Thanks!

Kosher bacon? Very funny line, Dan, but I don't think it fits the poem.

Nice try, but who is SHE? This pronoun has no antecedent. Thanks anyway, Wes. I'll be checking in on Oogie later.

I had to look up the word CLOTURE to see what it meant. My dictionary says: The closure of a Congressional debate. Thanks for teaching me a new word.

Very nice thought. Fits in with the rest of the poem, but not a very good rhyme. Thanks for the suggestion.

Excellent rhyme. That one is worth considering. Thanks, Kelly.

Perfect on the rhyme, but perhaps dangerous to my marriage. Thanks, Elisabeth.