Unfinished Dream Comments

I agree with Dave, great poem, and the second verse speaks directly to me.

Great poem. I love this. I stopped writing 15 years ago, i started writing again 7 weeks Ago. So i guess this is my unfinished dream, and your very kind comments are making It all worth while. Thankyou.

this is an excellent poem... moving, a journey!

This is a really deep experience. The way that you ended it, seems to me as near to perfection as is possible. We all owe our existence to supernovas- for the heavy elements in our bodies- we are all made of the stuff of stars, so you could say that when we die- we are returned back again to stardust- not a homely end, at all, is it? Wonderful work, Smoky!