Tuesday, November 13, 2007

Unfinished Comments

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My dearest darling, my sweetheart,
i write to tell you, u have my heart.
And also to say that,
i failed to love you, i fell apart.
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Peya Jakob
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Peya, I love this because your title jells so wonderfully with the closing lines. I love this because you write with a bleeding heart where you write six times 'how' you adore your sweetheart. I love this because you are a sensitive poet with a gift for words such as these. Karin Anderson

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