Sunday, August 5, 2012
Unfinished Comments
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when we began to drift,
i began to fall.
when you began to leave,
i started to withdraw.
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Kelly Seale
07 August 2012
Hi Erika, This is a desperate voice that pleas to deaf ears. Understand that when two souls drift apart, there is the wind that blows between them, carring away the closeness- the heart. -Very Good Write Erika. -Kelly.
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8/1/2025 10:20:24 AM # 1.0.0
assertive..... exuding will power...yep ma'am....the soft power taking control... lovely....like a much trodden heroine from a classical tome.... and i liked yer open ended approach...signifying hope not closure... :) ***