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love this love the way you use you own slang i can relate to this and that is important like in Scotland wee kin say things that others find hard to understand so nae bother wee manknow whit i meen lol a 10 from me well done

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Very creative and interesting. Nice slang, though I would prefer that you'd write out the whole word instead of just writing abbreviations. That's a little tip of mine. :) Good job! Wolfkens