Thursday, March 21, 2013

Unfaithful Comments

Rating: 5.0

Not a day passes by, not thinking about you,
believing in my love, which I know is true.
Waiting for you, to come back,
with a lot of hopes, but no regrets, which I lack.
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Vishal Sharma
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Captain Herbert Poetry 24 April 2014

Thumbs up. Superb.10/10 again

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Aman Arora 10 September 2013

Rhythm very well maintained. Resemblance to Spirit Leaf's writing in this one!

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Paul Mwenelupembe 17 April 2013

A nice poem, well written, wonderful imagery but you need to work out on word form, style, structure and some sorts of chop up on some un-needed words. Read mine too and comment. Thanks for sharing me your poem. whith regards

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Niken Kusuma Wardani 10 April 2013

great poem, each words flow sweetly, blend perfectly with yr pure emotion you did write all your heart content in a solid-interesting rhyme

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Hazel Durham 23 March 2013

Amazing poem with such heartfelt pain and suffering spilling onto the page seething with anger! Great rhythm and flow. Superb write!

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