Not a day passes by, not thinking about you,
believing in my love, which I know is true.
Waiting for you, to come back,
with a lot of hopes, but no regrets, which I lack.
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Rhythm very well maintained. Resemblance to Spirit Leaf's writing in this one!
A nice poem, well written, wonderful imagery but you need to work out on word form, style, structure and some sorts of chop up on some un-needed words. Read mine too and comment. Thanks for sharing me your poem. whith regards
great poem, each words flow sweetly, blend perfectly with yr pure emotion you did write all your heart content in a solid-interesting rhyme
Amazing poem with such heartfelt pain and suffering spilling onto the page seething with anger! Great rhythm and flow. Superb write!
Thumbs up. Superb.10/10 again