Wednesday, August 26, 2015

Unfaithful Comments

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You can’t take away my pain
The cut is too deep in my heart
You fell into his arms smiling
Discarding my love as a speck of dirt
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Anil Kumar Panda
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Linda A 25 October 2015

i can picture that rosebush on the moon as easily as i can see the grass outside...so that must mean it exists :) but on the dark side im sure..i relate most to this kinda love poem so thank you for another beautiful write

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Sanjukta Nag 26 August 2015

If you ever need a Rose from moon.. what a line! loved it.. a lover's pain of a broken heart is wonderfully expressed. thank you

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