Unfaithful Comments

sun is the truth and moon is false dark is the field of earning untruth but poor boody have the strong soul it will be always there Nice to you I love your poems A Ummar

Well some ppl say they are faithful But all creatures can be decieve Like the beginning it was unfaithfulness that brought us here... Who am I not to be Maybe i will give u a flower if i saw u crying

Love has so many different forms and one of them is unfaithful love. Wonderful.

Hard hearted love, kept with mad to smile over pains, of beloved. good write read mine, written truth,

very touching, almost childlike in its innocence. anxiety, longing, all brought out so poignantly.10 Mamta

is death, the same as DYING! thanks for bringing in another set of DUELITY into my Existance..... with best wishes for a REWARDING week :)

hey i d be thrilled if you can kiss my cheek... so here is a flying kiss to you! ! ! ! lol! ! ! with love shan

it is a yes. you did it well here.....

a querry deep on a soul...for a self exam of conscience tolerance... nice write....10

After Nikujn's comment on your poem there is hardly any room to praise it any further. It is beautiful and gives you reason to write more

A sweet poem - makes one wary of 'unfaithful' love! - Raj Nandy

would you lie, would you run and hide unfaithful love stays in your heart... simply blssoming poem.. iloved it....10 mary to marry..anywhere..just reference

An abrupt finish to the poem does not take away the beauty of it. Simple, some would say trite, it is what poetry should be. H

Beautiful Lady Grace, Questions, Questions, But true love always rules. Very good poem terrific job. I give you a 10. Your Friend Lynn

Well written.Sadness all over.

Hello LG...very well penned... unfortunately a cry we hear far too often regards Alf

wonderful poem, well expressed..10++++

A hrartfelt poem full of longing and strong feelings. Grace-ful indeed.

I shall smile when you smile I shall cry when you cry I shall try when yo try I shall walk with you in every breath when you move on, I shall too kiss death I shall lend my shine to your eyes I shall fly with you in blue skies through the joys and strife, with you I shall roam till the end of time, till the cows come home

Beautifully touchig to read Grace....loving..wanting..needing...craving verses enter this wonderful piece direct into the heart.....lovely penning sweetheart...10++