Tuesday, December 2, 2008

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the empty world all i see
the dark covers everywhere
frightened souls got no where to settle
fear, terrible, scary scene
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Lola Hi 27 July 2009

exellent job your poem is so meaningful.

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Reshma Ramesh 03 December 2008

neat poem.....keep writing

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 02 December 2008

Theres always a darkside within ourselves.......without us realizing.Good job Angel.

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Joseph Poewhit 02 December 2008

Clouds of illusion covering life

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Fiona Davidson 02 December 2008

Powerful words...very well written...thank you

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