it's not fair when you get nothing when you deserve everything
it's not fair when you try the best that you had to gave
as a result you fail it brokes your heart when it's brave
it's so not fair when the things didn't take the correct way
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It is unfair that like life your poem is too short..unfair but fact
Theres so much depth in this poem but I like it..... like a literary piece
I like this one.life is unfair but we can really do anything. good job
oh, your poetry is so nice i like it all you did good job and well and well! luwi
good piece keep working.............10