Thursday, July 9, 2009

Unfair Comments

Rating: 5.0

it's not fair when you get nothing when you deserve everything
it's not fair when you try the best that you had to gave
as a result you fail it brokes your heart when it's brave
it's so not fair when the things didn't take the correct way
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&&angel4ever && 04 August 2009

good piece keep working.............10

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Henry Brown 18 July 2009

It is unfair that like life your poem is too short..unfair but fact

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Ency Bearis 16 July 2009

a deep cogitations...but it is expressed and written well...

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Anjali Sinha 13 July 2009

Theres so much depth in this poem but I like it..... like a literary piece

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Bele Lele 11 July 2009

I like this one.life is unfair but we can really do anything. good job

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Steven Pimentel 11 July 2009

this poem is tuff.. i like it

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Luwi Habte 10 July 2009

oh, your poetry is so nice i like it all you did good job and well and well! luwi

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