shame I can not hide
ugliness clearly displayed
shattered life never mended
brokenness written upon flesh
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So intense! Yes, that's the word. Please, read some of my words, Silent Scream / A Rose by Anyother Name... ect, there is more, so much more! Great Ink! -Kelly
An ugly topic beautifully written. The conflict in emotions resolved in words, because these words touch us the readers. We all have scars, whether visible or hidden. The wounds heal but the marks remain. Each healed scar must remind us that we have won that particular battle. Now we all must resolve to win the war!
Wonderful write. Very vividly written. thank you and continue writing.
A well versed pain and frustration, expressed up to the utmost point when the scars lingers upon you
wow thats was so beautiful it i no how it fill i have a lot of same to i wish would just go away but rlly nice job
The way you captured the moment and froze it in time is deeply intense.
Each scar is merely a memory or a lesson learned... Or for some, a lesson wasted... As always you have enraptured my soul with your words... Very well done...
Unfaded scars remind us of what we have endured to make us who we are. The pain comes and goes but the scars are a constant reminder. -SG xo
Some scars will never heal, some can be covered, but...some will be healed only with time and patience....blessings, little one.
Well captured emotions in this sad poem, yes those scars are the sign of your victory, they are there because you went through hardships...understand 'YOU WENT THROUGH IT', so you conquered it, it didnt kill you my friend..all the best.
One of the most painful poems I've ever read. The world needs this kind of brutal honesty from those brave enough to record it and share it. Thank you SPG.
a passionate sadness, tormenting, tearing at the soul... may you find peace!
Packed with emotion and pain of fighting a battle against demons that cause the pain. A truly fantastic and honest poem.
The unfading scar will remind you each time when you need to do a decision...you will remind to do the best, that was the past time tell..even it look ugly but it save you from more in future_Unwritten Soul
Stunning and haunting ❤️