Unfading Scares Comments

Rini, your two opening lines remind me of a poem by Carl Sandburg, a favorite poet of mine, his one titled Primer Lesson which you can find here in PH and elsewhere on line. -Glen

Words! ! Negative words! Hurt a lot. Be Strong! ! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing.

Hi Rini, This is a poem that bares the naked truth. Words can be sharper than a knife. It pierces the heart so strongly that it can never be erased throughout your life. A powerful poem that deserves a full score....10

One must take care when opening one's mouth or spraying ideas folks don't like to be un-admired Words often pierce good verse all love praise so your words rephrase

Great poem about unfading scares and unfading love.

They knew truly- her love is unfading but they feel that from the path of stray! /// nice writing

Words are like sweet chocolate and sometimes words are like bullet. We shall be careful in expressing words. An amazing poem is shared.