Friday, March 16, 2007

Unexplained Comments

Rating: 2.5

There is this feeling –
Not an emotion, not a tangible sensation,
But a deep and unspeakable sense
That I cannot explain in words or in art.
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Sophia White
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Jonzo Bandwagoner 28 March 2007

This poem drove me crazy! Very well written, so non-tangible that the reader is left feeling like he grasped what the reader intended to say, but with no idea what that is. Nice.

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Jim Foulk 16 March 2007

you put your feelings on to paper and you don't know what you will come up with, but in your case, it was a wonderful write, well said.

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I know what you mean but I can't quite put my finger on it! Nice work Clair

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