Unexplainable Love Comments

this, too, is a very pretty poem. you expressed yourself very well. keep it up

A hallucination of nothing sweeter, Of a girl thats you which makes my heart litter, Love that is unexplainable, Which I try n explain but im unable. oh, i like it

Wow I felt that poem I've written similar poems in the past. Sometimes love is so strong that words can't describe them. But you know the feeling is there. Thanks for sharing and remember. Spread Yourself! ! ! ! ~Xeniyah

Get rid of the thy in this one it dosen't fit but that's all it's a good poem Eddi

U got to be in love... to make this poem flawless... keep up!

i like this poem keep up your writing..! !

A very good love poem. Very touching.

A tender love poem Eddy, thanks 10 Lynda xx

This has a wonderful description, full of tenderness.

Again. This sounds like something the speaker in Sweet Misery would say to their love. Awesome poem.

When I look into your poem, love shines in its brightest form. Eddie explains well!