Saturday, July 11, 2009

Unexpectedly Wanting Comments

Rating: 5.0

I never thought I’d ever feel this way
Neither did I expect, nor dare to dream
‘Cause you’re just too high from where I lay
An impossible desire for me you seem
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Reylan Loberternos
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Obinna Eruchie 15 July 2009

A passionate poem penned well.

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Marieta Maglas 13 July 2009

nice realistic poem, well penned with deep ideas..10+

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Sue Sie 12 July 2009

This is a well expressed poem with heartfelt emotion bursting through... Thanks for sharing this....10 Sue

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Miriam Maia Padua 12 July 2009

touching...nice thoughts words are wonderfully chosen ..flowing with melancholy.. i love your way of putting your thoughts into poetry it has a soft flow... 10++ lovelots, maia

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