Thursday, February 21, 2013

Unexpected Moments Comments

Rating: 5.0

As I was headed for the store
suddenly much to my surprise
you appeared from out of no where
with much joy seen in your eyes
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Dee Corpolongo
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Unwritten Soul 10 September 2013

This brought a lot of happiness to me when its like a striking moment of old good time back to life again...it very natural in this poem! _Soul

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Ken E Hall 03 June 2013

I love a love story and this is one I think the beginning spells the end, cheers...regards

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Lyn Paul 30 March 2013

I believe friendship is so much stronger than love yet enjoy the unexpected moments that life shall bring.

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Dee Corpolongo 23 February 2013

This was an old bf from the past, and a magical night of what may be a new start, but slowly! ! ! We'll see! ! !

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Valerie Dohren 21 February 2013

This is great Dee - have you found a new guy, or is this a coming together again?

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Dee Corpolongo

Dee Corpolongo

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