Thursday, May 1, 2014

Unexpected Kiss Comments

Rating: 5.0

It was Almost sunset,
It was after very long they met.
The guy hid something,
The girl wanted to know.
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Sneha Celine
COMMENTS
Fabrizio Frosini 04 January 2015

lovely, intimate, innocent, sweet... Brava Sneha!

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Kirti Sharma 17 May 2014

Wowwww! ! ! ! Amzing! Its so sweet.... seriously! I could feel each and every line of this poem! Ur right... no girl can ever forget this moment in her life....

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Sarmad Mirza 11 May 2014

Really a nice one I kissed it from my eyes.

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Colleen Courtney 01 May 2014

An amazing and most beautiful poem! Truly great! Such talent you have, please keep writing! Enjoyed this write so very much!

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Akhtar Jawad 01 May 2014

One of the most beautiful poems I have ever read. I was mesmerized and amazed, Smiled, smiled and smiled again, A simple language, understood without any strain, I moved to another page, still I am chased. The feelings and the sentiments, Of a girl and her maiden kiss, A long awaited pleasant bliss, Decorating her face with ornaments. It's not only she, I have enjoyed this kiss, Lucky enough, did not miss, It's a poem for you, it's a poem for me.

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