Monday, November 26, 2012

Unexpected Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dim looked the stars then disappeared
Behind the clouds pale moon appeared.

Like a damsel after a shower,
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Jahan Zeb
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Hazel Durham 26 November 2012

This is so fragile and delicately written, ethereal, sublime, unforgettable! Outstanding write! !

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Unwritten Soul 26 November 2012

Ah....somehow those words calm me to paint colors in imaginary mind of mine...I expected to this Unexpected poem as a nice one..an my expectation is not unexpected, cool! _Soul

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Jahan Zeb

Jahan Zeb

Malakand Pakistan
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