Monday, August 27, 2012

Unexpected Comments

Rating: 3.5

She feels alone.
There is noone around to help.
All she sees is darkness.
No light is shown to her.
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Christina J. Williams
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Kelvin Owusu 28 August 2012

i like how you end on a positive note has a whole light the end of the tunnel feel very well written

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