Unending Time Comments

Grand intimidating stuff! Really amazing poem.Congratulations.

All the pains of life can be healed... Time dulls all wounds... Another agonisingly beautiful write...

Wow that was amazing. I love how you put your words together. I think you're going to be a great poet one day.

Very well expressed. Nightmares seem endless, but there is hope, and I wish you well.10

Tick Tock... This poem resonates like one of those grandfather clocks with the wooden box case that sounds out the precision moments of its life. Tick Tock...

Sad poem my friend, though ecceptionally written....memories will never fade indeed, but there's always a silver lining at the end of each dark cloud...faith do wonders for people who have it, and remember courage is the will to go on even when you feel like throwing in the towel....that day is just around the corner my dear friend.

considering the content of your poem; have to give it a 10 out of 10! ! ! !

You know that kind of shutter your heart does when something hits you with that anxious chill and you have to take a deep breath to shake it off? This. This right here does that and it's almost too much at once. Great poem, you just keep getting better.: D

Grl, this is beautiful. The words sort of rain down the page. Cascading, if you will. I always want to give you the biggest hug ever, cause your cool! !

Very strong, I can relate! Great Piece

Very powerful as always. Haunting in parts, So very well put together. A fantastic poem.

This is a very strong write. I feel your pain sis.

good expression......