Sunday, August 9, 2015

Unemployment Comments

Rating: 5.0

Engaged to you when I was only thirteen,
A complete woman now being nineteen,
In the last six years saw many changes in me,
You came every year but you could not see,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Madathil Rajendran Nair 10 August 2015

Great write, Aktar-ji. You have captured the poignancy of the poor girl's situation in a very realistic manner.

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Khalid Saifullah 10 August 2015

Libel of increasing unemployment in Pakistan is faced by innocent women.............10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 August 2015

Marvellous expression. An intensive and amusing poem I like most. Thans for sharing. .....10

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Kelly Kurt 10 August 2015

Haunting and beautiful. I once thought such of a girl and our future

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