Unemployed Comments

It's a nice composition when 'bored and unemployed' in bed. I enjoyed this piece.

Nice! You got excellent rythmn with this, I agree though - don't let your batteries run out yet! ! Moyax

Konjit, Structure: flawless. Sentiment: pessimistic. Work: outstanding. With respect, Denis Joe (being brief for once)

Way to go gurl. This is a cool poem. Don't stop your batteries yet though :)

This is a good poem, reads well. I like it. Congrats.!