Saturday, September 24, 2011

Undying Memories Comments

Rating: 5.0

As the wind blows
with a soothing murmur,
fallen leaves...
I wake up
...
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Shadow Girl 02 October 2011

Beautiful lines, weaved intricately to form a well written piece. -SG

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Hans Vr 24 September 2011

A very well witten touching poem. If this is the first one you wrote, definitely keep on writing. You have talent.

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