Saturday, December 13, 2008

Undying Love, Unbroken Promise, My Love Comments

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The weather these days is cold
But the thoughts of you keep me warm
Your words that linger in my mind make me giggle
The weather forecast reporter said it will rain today
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Paul Hansford 13 December 2008

Well constructed - we get a clue in 'We did click on pretty fast', and then in full with 'we can only keep in touch through the internet' and finally you go on so that the person is almost with you physically. The developing friendship is clear, but we all know that what somebody puts online may be only what they want you to see; it could be too easy to 'fall in love' with someone you never meet. But as you have written it, this is very touching.

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Fiona Davidson 13 December 2008

Lovely well written love poem...thank you

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