Wednesday, September 10, 2008

Undying Love Comments

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Love, a feeling I would never understand.
A feeling so very powerful that it makes one do things.
The very same feeling I wanted to feel in a very long time.
The feeling that tore my heart into pieces.
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Antonio Liao 10 September 2008

always a new beginning that we realize that things are new again... sometimes when we are not in our comfort zone.... we don't know what to do... but for a.. moment things getting right of where to go.... undying love never it ends... just..a retreat to begin again a new beginning... i like your poem... kept it up....i salute thank you 10/10

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 10 September 2008

Well said Sora, we tend to blame our self when things go wrong, but these things happen until the right one comes along.. Andrew 10

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