Undying Love. Comments
The Moon
Is not as far
As you
Are now from me.
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The opening lines are very captivating . They grip the heart to feel what's in the heart of the wonderful Poetess.
A poem of love of great depth. So beautiful and heartfelt. Very touching lines that penetrate gently to the core of being.
Love stays alive, though unfulfilled. Beautifully articulated feeling of deep love.
Your lovely words for this poem, dear Nosheen are the true conception of this poem's being. Thank you so much!
Dear Susan, such incomparable words for so little. Poem and I thank you with all our affection and heart..
wrote a comment but comment disappeared--you are the poet of love, Sandra, all different shades and values of the illusive yet overwhelming emotion---excellent write about love withered but not gone --top marks! ! !
So very true, withered but not gone, You always find the perfect and emotional words to bless a poem with. Thank you so much!
Excellent write about love unshared, a love that has grown distant yet missed---we humans suffer so much from love--love given, love rejected, love grown old and gray... top marks!
Not my intention to make you sad. I certainly appreciate your heartfelt words.
Deeply shared! Appreciate your tender feelings very much! Thank you.
Thank you, dear Jayne, your understanding and kind words for this poem mean a lot to me.
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11/16/2025 10:41:04 AM # 1.0.0
' Like the life giving fluid that runs in every tree'. Beautiful line from a beautiful poem. To my favorites.