Friday, June 24, 2016

Undying Hope Comments

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The grandeur visible to the naked eyes
solidified through the very essence
Kashmiriat yet had cracks appearing from nowhere
Shedding its leaves it had owned since eras together
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Tribhawan Kaul
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Valsa George 02 July 2016

Beneath all differences, there is an invisible thread of harmony, though it is broken now and then! Let us hope that slowly it will be linked in tact binding all into a single brotherhood! A poem breathing in intense patriotic sentiments!

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Tribhawan Kaul 08 July 2016

Thank you. Hope sustains us all.

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Rajnish Manga 24 June 2016

Lovely poem which reaffirms the conviction that the cultural bonds can never be severed for ever. Though, the present phase has taken its toll but the spirit of Kashmiriat will remain intact like an invisible thread. Thanks for sharing this emotional saga of Kashmiri Pandits, Sir. 'Kashmirat can't be dead? Long live Kashmiriat! ' Hope sustains life and mankind survives Pillars strong enough to withstand onslaughts Religious ethos and social tenets interweaving the brotherhood

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Tribhawan Kaul 25 June 2016

Thanks Rajnish Manga Ji for your insightful comment. Happy reading and writing.

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