Undying Comments

Hmmm... You are really romantic, but it sounds good (i'm not romantic type) . U have very good expression of your feelings. Your lady is imaginary beautiful, and your senses for her are high and clear. it is very nice. But be careful with short sentences, they maybe can sound empty.

You really are a lover of love! I loved this poem! ! ! !

wow, deep sensations, well chosen words and a strong catching tone, I loved it Ro'ya