Thursday, March 27, 2014

Undrown Memory Comments

Rating: 5.0

I still think sometimes of the boy who drown.
That summer I was 8 or 9, or was it 6 or 7?
I often wonder if his soul is still at the lakes bottom,
or gone off to heaven.
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Smoky Hoss
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Lawerence Mize 30 March 2014

A tableau that has left its impression stamped in your mind. I think we've all had a few of those in our lifetimes. I know I have.

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Dave Walker 29 March 2014

A great poem, what we don't know some times keeps us wondering for the rest of our lives.

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Valerie Dohren 27 March 2014

Was this a little boy you once knew Smoky, or a part of yourself you believe you have lost. Intriguing.

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