Monday, May 12, 2008

Undoubted Student Comments

Rating: 5.0

When a pupil unlearn a reflection of misconception
is like a brown pointed thorn
A known mental harm definitive with impulsiveness
takes over
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Lecie Bailey-Jackson
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Dr.subhendu Kar 16 May 2008

yet we learn, unlearn and relearn across the mental impulssiness..............nice imagery that flows............., i like it,10+, thanks for sharing

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David Desantis 12 May 2008

very very cool. This poem is filled with imagery! The idea of reflecting on your learning so as to 're-learn' or 'unlearn' trials/tribulations and knowledge while at the same time using metaphors is awesome. I like the thought of delayed gratification from continued accomplishment. Great job 10; /10

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