When a pupil unlearn a reflection of misconception
is like a brown pointed thorn
A known mental harm definitive with impulsiveness
takes over
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very very cool. This poem is filled with imagery! The idea of reflecting on your learning so as to 're-learn' or 'unlearn' trials/tribulations and knowledge while at the same time using metaphors is awesome. I like the thought of delayed gratification from continued accomplishment. Great job 10; /10
yet we learn, unlearn and relearn across the mental impulssiness..............nice imagery that flows............., i like it,10+, thanks for sharing
Hello, thank you for the positive feedback!