Undone Comments

from this, i see you expressing anger that people shott down your ambitions [the love of your life]. and i totally get that. ppl always tell me im too young to be writing a book or sumthing, or thinking the thoughts i do, but i cant help it. im me, and thats how it is. great write,10+

very nice abstract poem, keep writing............

Ouch, that's got to be terrible! I never really got over people who I found out were a lie. I thought I loved them until, I found out who they really were. Very expressive! Lovely poem!