Monday, July 24, 2006

Undone Comments

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Look into the mirror
wondering to myself
have the years truly been kind
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Daniel Wittfoth
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Wan Little 24 July 2006

Undone......how i like the way you wrote it Daniel. Someday, i hope, you'll done whatever is stuck in your heart. Wan

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Francesca Johnson 24 July 2006

Saying goodbye to a loved one and actually meaning it may be two different things, as you have shown in this well-written and enjoyable poem. Love, Fran xx

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