Tuesday, July 27, 2010

Undo This Moment Comments

Rating: 4.8

my sweet, my soul, my heart
unstressed my mind, uncover my eyes
unloved my body, my silence cries
unfreeze my hands, unquestioned my heart
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Chinedu Dike 26 September 2014

A powerful piece well penned. I guess walking away is a sensible option whenever there is tragedy in the bliss of love. Lovely. Thanks for sharing.10 marks for you. Please have a look at my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Vinod Kumar 25 August 2011

Beauty of the beloved`s smile with the beautiful landscape and cool....

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Elizabeth Mpanga 26 April 2011

this poem is packed with so much hurt! i can feel the pain of lose from your words. LOVE is a very starnge emotion. i love this. keep writing. you are so good

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Redd Juceekittee 10 January 2011

We create our own world. So, if you say that it is, it is. If you say 'I want this to have a positive outcome' then putting that type of energy out there draws in positive energy that equates to a more pleasant experience. Doom and gloom brings just that...Doom and gloom

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The Enigma 02 December 2010

its like i always say verry good but i dont know what to say about this one

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Sally Plumb Plumb 01 December 2010

You will learn from your past.

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