Saturday, October 9, 2010

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bishop you, fanatic me
though the stumbles, the unend far falls,
glitter of your soul across my bowed face,
i could no more stand looking into thy eyes
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Dagimawi Tujuba
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Kevin Carney 09 October 2010

undiscovered questions of your questing smiles numb soul, please pilfer one's silly silence one's fear, one's ingenouse emptiness I love these lines. This is a beautiful poem and I have to agree it's so sad. For your first write on PH you have written a very good poem. Welcome and please don't stop writing.

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