Wednesday, June 8, 2011

Undiscovered Lie Comments

Rating: 5.0

i can't live another day without you
laying here within my arms
to hear you heart beating
awash with tender loving charms
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nicola burkett
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 08 June 2011

Great poem. Rich in imagery and style. Wonderfully conceived. Liked it. I rated it 10/10. Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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