Tuesday, April 15, 2008

Undisclosed Feelings... Comments

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You came so close that I could smell you
Between those two perfect breasts
Scintillating smell wafting through
A tempting soft gully rests
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Saurabh Som
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Deepti Agarwal 25 April 2008

last para of this is very good... it shows yr strength.... power of words n expression :)

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Jurietta Duraan 15 April 2008

Hhhhmmm - the fragrance of forbidden love... good poem, Saurabh Som...I like the lines: 'your trust is my prison and guilt is my poison..' Yuri *

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