Friday, March 23, 2018

Undiagnosed Comments

Rating: 5.0

Buzzing a song flew around
Quietly crossed the barrier
Entered into the blood streams
And slowly spread into the body
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Rini Shibu
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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 November 2022

Typo: thought provoking

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 November 2022

Diagnosis is so crucial dear poetess. Improper diagnosis may lead to fatal consequences. A though provoking write

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M Asim Nehal 04 November 2018

Such confusion is bound to happen specially when test reports says something whereas the body and mind says something else, a fantastic poem, Rini.10++++

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Robert Murray Smith 08 May 2018

Rini, a song sings inside and sends us into a spin. +++10 Robert

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Akhtar Jawad 15 April 2018

After undergoing a number of tests the doctor failed to diagnose her sickness and said, I think you are perfectly all right. A poet was sitting there and waiting his turn, he said, No she is not, I think she is in love.

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Rini Shibu 16 April 2018

Wonderful comment Akhtarji..

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Unnikrishnan E S 24 March 2018

Hi Rini, Lovely write. Never knew a song can create such catastrophe. Is it a song by Cacophonix from Asterix Comics? Hehe! ! !

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Rini Shibu 25 March 2018

It was a mosquito..hehe Thanks

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 March 2018

Into the body! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rini Shibu 25 March 2018

Thanks Edward kofi...! ! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 March 2018

Buzzing of a song flew around and brought confused situation. An amazing poem is wisely and humorously presented...10

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Rini Shibu 24 March 2018

Thank you so much for visiting

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 23 March 2018

A poem that warms up the blood and helps rush them into the veins of the soul. Well penned Rini.

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Rini Shibu 24 March 2018

Thanks Subhas.**

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