Wednesday, November 21, 2018

Undetachable Moments Comments

Rating: 5.0

If ever i have to choose
between mist and breeze
I would say winter breeze
dont take the mist from me
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Rini Shibu
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 02 December 2018

nice sentiments Rini lovely soft poetry!) 10 ++++++++++++++++++++

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Unnikrishnan E S 21 November 2018

Hi Rini, Lovely write. Loved these lines especially, breath in the misty fragrance Giving freshness and pleasure all day long like heaven on earth -unnikrishnan

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Anil Kumar Panda 21 November 2018

A very sweet and lovely poem on winter days. Very well crafted with a smooth flow. Loved it Rini.

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M Asim Nehal 21 November 2018

Nature at its best during this time as it evokes love in every living being. A fantastic poem with great imagery.10/10

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Lamar Cole 21 November 2018

This is a very wonderful and delightful poem to read.

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