Friday, May 25, 2018

Undestined Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Strangers we were, strangers we are;
Slumbered we both,
But the dreams transisted there;
Something become eternal for us.
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Arushi Sharma
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Raj Swami 13 June 2018

10 vote for share beautiful poem

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Arushi Sharma 23 June 2018

Thank you😊

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Sona Khajuria 27 May 2018

Danced like the jumping beans; Stumbled and fall, We cried like a child; Still holding on each other; But that was a dream. Beautifully woven...I just loved it Arushi....10++

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Arushi Sharma 27 May 2018

Thank you..😊

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 May 2018

The dreams transisted there although you both are strangers. Although you are trapped by stranger still you are in love. This seems to be wonderful. This poem is cleverly penned love poem...10

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Arushi Sharma 27 May 2018

Many thanks for your praising remarks😊..Kumarmani Mahakul

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