Wednesday, June 10, 2009

Underweight Comments

Rating: 4.5

i try to gain weight
but somehow i keep it off
things start to taste
like the things im eatin' off
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lil miss
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Marieta Maglas 10 June 2009

i love this beautiful simile ''things start to taste like the things im eatin' off'' the poem is a deep reflection on existence...well written..10++

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