Saturday, October 3, 2020

Understanding Your Life's Journey..... Comments

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Climbing up hills all through my childhood
And fathoming valleys as I steeped into adulthood
The armour of hour glass trippled within a wink
And I stood crippled, dreaming multitude in sink
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Varsha M
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 03 October 2020

thanks but you may like to review first two lines and gg

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M Asim Nehal 03 October 2020

Fantastic journey, nicely written. I have a suggestion since Sonnet is of 14 lines its theme can be divided should you wish, into 7 and 7 lines each that will look appropriate. ababcdc defefgg 10*******

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