Friday, January 15, 2021

Understanding Love.. Comments

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The lady with a lamp,
Happens to camp;
Next to the farm,
In hope to calm;
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Varsha M
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Sharad Bhatia 17 January 2021

Mind Blowing Poem. Really superb. Thankyou for sharing such a beautiful poem.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 January 2021

I can visualize the lovely lady with a lamp.. beautifully summed up! A wonderful love poem.

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Varsha M 17 January 2021

Sir your words inspire. Thank-you.

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Luis Estable 15 January 2021

It`s hard to see where one lines ends and another begins due to the zero punctuation. Some verses could be much better, but I can`t enter details here due to space

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Varsha M 16 January 2021

Sir thank-you so much for your comments. Yes thank-you for drawing my attention yo punctuation which is very essential for communicating right message. Thank-you sir.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 15 January 2021

The kind of love that is the foundation of marital bliss is described in your charming poem. Beautiful!

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Varsha M 16 January 2021

Thank-you Evelyn for your beautiful comment.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 January 2021

A fascinating poem of love. A sweet depiction of the many wonders of love.

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Varsha M 16 January 2021

Thank-you very much Rose. You always inspire.

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