Wednesday, August 14, 2013

Understanding Beauty From Your Eyes Comments

Rating: 4.4

Perhaps because i was born blind
Black be my forever favorite color
My trusted eyes are from you my friend
Though i don't know what beauty means
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Unwritten Soul
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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 August 2018

People may not believe my beauty experience Sorry because all things look same to me More sorry, i cant explain about colors because i am a blind man But i have a heart That still can see many...........these lines are most impressive. I love these lines. This poem attracts me for second visit.

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Rebecca Navarre 16 January 2018

Endlessly Beautiful Soul! ! ! ! ! Ever So Heart Touching! ! ! ! ! Beyond Words! ! ! ! ! Beyond Numbers! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 November 2017

A blind man feels beauty in trust of his friend's words. He believe him and his eyes. He really feels everything black as he is blind but he has an another eye through which he can see real beauty and that is heart. A kind hearted man never says ugly and feels the eternal beauty. Dear Soul, you have astutely and nicely painted this theme in this poem that touches the hearts of the readers. Beautiful poem with lofty insight!

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 September 2016

Favorite color! Nice piece of work.

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Heather Wilkins 03 October 2013

a great note you have added to a lovey poem.

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Dee Corpolongo 30 August 2013

A Beautiful and well observation of the heart poem. I also love the advice you give in your comment, as it also is beautifully said....and understood. Thank you for seeing the beauty of a good heart, Soul. May life only show you that vision forevermore.

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Farah Ilyas 18 August 2013

People may not believe my beauty experience Sorry because all things look same to me More sorry, i cant explain about colors because i am a blind man But i have a heart That still can see many...wow Great Soul may all of us have such vision while giving judgement regarding beauty, though simple but too deep..well Done

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Valerie Dohren 17 August 2013

Although a blind person may not be able to see beauty, neither can he see the ugliness in the world and that has to be a good thing. His seeing friend can bring him only beauty. A lovely poem Soul, and very inspired.

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Yasmin Khan 17 August 2013

Your poem reminds me of Helen Keller and her teacher. How vivid and fertile your imagination is! You write with the vision of a blind man in first person narration, going deep into things.

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Yasmin Khan 17 August 2013

An empathetic write with vision of a blind person, how fertile your imagination is! Kudos dear Soul.

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Elena Sandu 17 August 2013

Beautiful thoughts dear Soul, thank you for share! True, black has no light but it is kind and very peaceful if near any other colour would bring a best light, true life for them. It also strong no matter what comes into its sight will hardly change, right? The unsighted people may not see but yes, you are right they can feel the beauty with heart. The only thing that I could pitty them is for not being able to see their beauty with own eyes.

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Nontobeko Dlamini 16 August 2013

many have described beauty with sentences, paragraphs of complex diction but this poem of simple wording does it for me. This friend who choose to see the good in everything find happiness where none find it. Thank you for sharing your wonderful soul.

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Khairul Ahsan 15 August 2013

The poem is beautiful, but a bit too long, if I may say so! good hearted people dont talk bad or ugly words. I wonder if my comment above will categorize me as a bad hearted one or not!

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 15 August 2013

Wow! ...your mighty brush has once again painted a masterpiece, the colours are so bright and beautiful.....you have a good heart my friend and you will be rewarded for that. Really great poem. Siya_! !

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Bri Edwards 15 August 2013

dear US, Rail of colors appeared after the raindrops....this line caused me to look up definition of rail. i thought it would mean a bird (i have seen) or ONE bar, such as on a rail fence or, i suppose as part of railroad tracks. i now know that rail can mean a set of bars, as in a rainbow! Rail of colors is a nice change from writing rainbow. AND you mentioned that the rail appears after the raindrops. this caused me to google rainbow formation: Rainbow Formation One of nature's most splendid masterpieces is the rainbow. A rainbow is an excellent demonstration of the dispersion of light and one more piece of evidence that visible light is composed of a spectrum of wavelengths, each associated with a distinct color. To view a rainbow, your back must be to the sun as you look at an approximately 40 degree angle above the ground into a region of the atmosphere with suspended droplets of water or even a light mist. Each individual droplet of water acts as a tiny prism that both disperses the light and reflects it back to your eye. So you see that there are droplets of water where the rainbow forms, though the viewer is usually/always? where the raindrops have moved to another location. as for the message of the poem and the telling of it: EXCELLENT! and the poet's note was very welcome as well. though i found the english to not be polished, meaning not the way i would write it as a native-born speaker of english, i had little if any trouble understanding the poem. it really was very good......even though if the blind man had ME for a friend, i might try to convey ugliness with my words. BUT even as i was typing that last sentence, i realized and remembered the saying: beauty is in the eye of the beholder, and that can easily be said for ugliness as well. then we might get into the discussion of various kinds of beauty such as visual beauty, moral beauty, and aural beauty. i've said enough! thanks for sharing. bri

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Ramesh Rai 15 August 2013

beauty cant b seen with these two naked eyes that so millions of peole with eyes are unable to realise the beauty they can never express in comparision to a person without eye. a blind do realise the beauty thro eyes of heart. a profound write having a colorful n mystic flavor. a complete perfection with true melody. i too have posted more than 500 poems but in very rare there is such perfection. thank you so much for sharing.

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 15 August 2013

nice imagery, very imaginative and creative you send a message with a simple story, but that message so deep and beauty has its own way to blossom foe everyone cause beaty is universal nice written

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Geetha Jayakumar 15 August 2013

But I have heart who still can see many..Beautiful write..if one want to sense a beauty, eyes may not see that beauty which ones heart can see...so true..its how we see the beauty in the world.. This poem carries lot of in depth meaning.. Loved reading it...feeling pleasant....

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