Sunday, February 3, 2013

Understanding.. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Under the bright white well travelled light,
We need the comfortingly cool dark shade to hide,
Which we call umbrellas of mushroom homes,
That saves us from heat and rain storms.
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Spiritual Seeker 07 February 2013

I simply love the lines.....beautifully crafted. Excellent poem. A 10.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 05 February 2013

Nice understanding of the fire-flies of which few would a thought and it took only you to compose a poem on their behalf! Lovely write to enjoy!

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