You come to me close,
and i avoiding you
but there's something
something you need to know
...
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An interesting write. Captivating one. Beautiful poem with amusing depiction. Enjoyed. Thanks a lot.
As i look into your eyes my mind so speechless whispering you closely close enough between you and me Zip your jean, unwind your mean...a good poem revealing lot ... thank you dear poetess. dev
Lol...a few drinks does make us a little or lot braver to say what is on our mind. I enjoyed this one Soul...10
Hahahahahahaha....just i dont drink, soooo.... let it be that way hahaha
Getting drunk is almost always a humiliating experience. Amusing, dear Soul!
A serious subject delt with in a very humerous but powerful way. Well done my friend!
drunks are unpredictable, best stay away, good advice, lil soul, with big heart, words of wisdom/10
The great soul has also little problems with people :) Let drunker keep themselves away from this young soul but conscious book lovers have wonderful place in his large soul. I love this poem and assess it 10+++++++++
'Hey drunker, this is not a toilet, it's library and your 'waste' wet my book! why you wear different pair of shoes Zip your jean, unwind your mean. funny situation. in the library........ thank u for the fun of it. and ur audacity with which you speak to him. thank you dear poetess.