Underneath The Falling Icicles Comments

WOW! WOW! (The double WOW! test) I added this great poem to my list right after RED SWEATER INTENTIONS another stunning poem... The question which closes this poem is so perfectly pitched, so provocative and enticing, it has made me pause before going on to a further critique. It provides closure to this poem as a piece of literature. But more important it sends shock waves into the brain over the double danger of nightmares and daymares. We are such fragile beings, really. Where can we find the courage needed?

nice. It shows a good imaginery and an interesting flow of words