Thursday, September 1, 2022

Underneath The Bridge Comments

Rating: 4.8

Low, way below the wrought, rain and sun-beaten asphalt of man
Dwell empty, hungry, crying souls in search of the master's plan

Some black and some white, some young and some old
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Stewart Watkins
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Kim Barney 02 September 2022

Thousands of people in this country are homeless, and you have depicted their life in a touching way.5 stars.

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Bri Edwards 02 September 2022

I 'love' your rhyming and photo. The poem is an incomplete, but easily-digested story of a life most Americans will not see, except maybe the daytime 'walking city streets' part.

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Bri Edwards 02 September 2022

Stewart, five stars for this. I've been under some bridges, seen signs of human habitation, but never been consigned to such a life.

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