Saturday, June 16, 2007

Underage Girl Comments

Rating: 5.0

She disappears into the foreboding night
While her mother is sleeping in the bedroom next to hers,
She’s underage but escapes
To the Atlantis Lounge
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Uriah Hamilton
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Mazey daisey 25 June 2007

i thought it was awesome..thanks for sharing

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Bell Song 25 June 2007

Thoughtful and sensitive.

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Will Barber 20 June 2007

A poem which explores the darkness - indeed, the evil - of the human condition. The ending lines floored me, because my own childhood was idyllic. - Will

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