Sunday, March 17, 2013

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Don't be a target to concede defeat.
Get up on your feet and keep moving on.
Don't be a target to concede defeat.
Remove this from your mind and keep moving on.
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Douglas Scotney 17 March 2013

your poems, Lawrence Pertillar, express how poorly time is spent, and your repetitions stress this issue as urgent.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

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