Monday, September 22, 2014

Under Tree Tops Comments

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Incessantly walking down lanes through forests of imagination,
taking time to see every detail under the tree tops.

Little animals looking curiously, running or hopping every-
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RoseAnn V. Shawiak
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Daniel Brick 22 September 2014

I just started reading your poems with two on suicide, and it strikes me this poem displays an attitude to life which is the polar opposite of a suicidal impulse. First, you find wonder in that given of our existence - NATURE - and that takes you outside of the narrow horizons of self-absorption. Second, you are singing the praises of other living things - existence is not a burden you have to carry, but a gift you carry to distribute to one and all. Which is exactly what this poem achieves!

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RoseAnn V. Shawiak

RoseAnn V. Shawiak

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